When you are waiting in a long line before getting on the roller coaster you start to get nervous and excited but when you are next in line your palms start to sweat and you forget why you ever wanted to go on the coaster in the first place. When they call "next!" it's too late and there is no going back from that point onwards. You step into the ride and pull the safety belt towards you untill you hear a loud "CLICK" and then you are locked in. Your palms start to wet the railing. The monsterous coaster screams with a death defying shout and starts to move, you feel like you are going to wet your pants. It climbs the tracky hill slowly, then all of a sudden the coaster dips at a startling speed and dives down with the wind in your mouth filling your cheeks. The screams of people around you convince you that you are diving to your death! Then, as soon as you realize how high you are you start to panic and ear pearcing screams start to run out of your mouth. But before you know it the ride had ended and for some strange reason you want to experience it all over again!
Thursday, August 23, 2007
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“The monsterous coaster screams with a death defying shout and starts to move, you feel like you are going to wet your pants”
And, “It climbs the tracky hill slowly, then all of a sudden the coaster dips at a startling speed and dives down with the wind in your mouth filling your cheeks.”
I think these two sentences are really good since you used a lot of strong adjectives and described the experience of riding a rollercoaster specifically.
Philippe another thing to consider is the sounds of the wheels on the track. Also if you describe more of the smell then that might make it sound like a real thrill. But since it is your blog that is a thing you might consider.
Hey Phillipe,
great description, it really feels like I am there, standing in line. Great Job!
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